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  • after reading a certain book....

    this was a result...
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  • #2
    Love it! Think it would be better as a high contrast b/w image or with a background that was closer to the color of her top.

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    • #3
      I do agree that a color close to the shirt would make this image SCREAM- but I love it anyway.

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      • #4
        Thanks - I'm only just starting to build up some b/g's - I only have 5....and only 3 when I took this... : )

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        • #5
          That book wouldn't happen to be Chiascuro, would it?

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          • #6
            I like everything except the shadow caused by her hair close to her right eye, and I would like a little more color harmony between the subject and the background.

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            • #7
              Just a quick hand in possibilities you might consider.

              Added lip color . . .to match the evening wear she's apparently wearing. The au-naturAL look seems to go better with a more casual dress.

              Then added some color to the background to enhance the color in her dress

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              • #8
                Well . . .never mind . . .we apparently aren't able to post changes to images here

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                • #9
                  The shadow doesn't bother me. I would agree on the bg though. I have 3 bg's myself and plan to add a host more. I know it's tough.

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                  • #10
                    o.k. scuse the sucky ps work...but would this have worked better? providing I had the actual color b/g and lipstick?
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                    • #11
                      no that is too bright and like you said the PS sucks. I like the image, if you do anything to the background make it gentle not overwhelming.

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                      • #12
                        I like the first one- this second background is too bright and takes your eyes off your subject.

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                        • #13
                          OK here is a BG change, but I did not have a problem with the original background. I also do not find the shadow near the eye to be offensive, it is a very soft shadow and I also like it. Here is the background with a little color added from the dress.
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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Anonymous Member
                            o.k. scuse the sucky ps work...but would this have worked better? providing I had the actual color b/g and lipstick?
                            Yes . . .looks great

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                            • #15
                              Here it is as a high contrast b/w
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